Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It has been argued for quite a long time whether art is an important part of academic studies or it is just a waste of precious time. However, while I believe that it is necessary to educate children about contemporary culture and history at school, I disagree with the fact that it is a waste of time. In this essay, I will discuss both the views with supporting examples and pieces of evidence, followed by my opinion.
With regards to the importance of art in school education, it has been observed that art played a vital role in educating children about our culture and classical history. Although some people do not prefer to study it as a major academic subject, many people believe that art is necessary for each and every child to know about the culture. Studying art at school provides great opportunities to learn about historical monuments and old sculptures. In many government schools, for instance, history is included as a major subject in their school curriculum.
On the other hand, some people believe that studying art at school is completely a waste of time and it should not be included in school level education. In addition, due to modernization, there is no use of art in technical and skillful jobs. Furthermore, many people find it boring to study about history and art, which force them to think that it is wasting their precious time. For example, software engineers have to work on advanced technical jobs which required modern culture and the latest ways to do a job.
In my opinion, we should learn about our art and cultures at school because it provides us knowledge of our ancestors and historical beliefs. Most importantly, art and culture help us to learn about how to behave with our elders and increase our knowledge about history. In many international universities, for instance, people from different countries and cultures brought together in one place, sometimes, they want to learn about our art and culture. At that time, we would be able to explain to them about our art if we study it at school. Thus, art should be included in our school education as a mandatory subject.
To sum up, the art should be included in our education system at the school level as a mandatory subject. We should not consider that it is just a waste of time because it gives us background knowledge of our country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'disagree that'.
Suggestion: disagree that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78378378378 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69788939273 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452088452088 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2738529566 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.166666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6111111111 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327408657129 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113403617684 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589877156567 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198892563483 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509972574107 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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