You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter1) say where you think you left the papers2) explain why they are so im

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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
1) say where you think you left the papers
2) explain why they are so important
3) tell the manager what you want him/her to do

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to ask you for some help in finding my personal documents, which I left in your hotel yesterday. This incident took place when I was returning after attending an official meeting at the hotel's conference room. At first, I thought that I lost my papers on my way home, but very soon I realized that I had forgotten these documents at the hotel. Now, I can clearly remember that the documents were placed on the table in the conference room.

These documents are very important to me because it contains some official confidential information related to government projects. In addition to that, it also contains my passport and some other personal identification documents. The official documents have some vital information related to future projects of the company, which should not be exposed or leaked.

I would be grateful to you if you could help me to keep them in a safe place. Moreover, I would like to request you to please deliver these critical documents to my address as soon as possible. I would be more than happy to pay for any transportation charges if required.

I am looking forward to hearing from you on an urgent basis.

Yours sincerely,
Matt Henry

Votes
Average: 8.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83732057416 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79524135558 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622009569378 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9683002711 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.25 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2778338979 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08985491525 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809666788325 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154134791439 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878883570507 0.0580467560999 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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