Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Violence is a social problem that increases over the years. Although many people believe that the offenders should be put behind the bars for long period, other people believe there are other measurements which are more effective.
There are benefits of keeping prisoner in jail for long term. This gives police staff enough opportunity to rehabilitate the person who commits the crime.For example, a person who committ serious crime like murder should be verdict with longer sentence so that the person can be re-educate and avoid to do re-offend.
However, the person who spends much time in prison will get chance to meet with other criminals. This will have adverse effects on the person that they may turn more crueler. Instead, the person should be given the opportunity to do community services, this in turn give chance to person to positive back to the society. Also, the person who committ minor offense should be kept under probation in the supervision of professional institutes like rehabilitation center.
In my opinion, rather than giving longer sentence to the offender, the government should more focus on their resources and find ways to reduce crime because in many countries though the duration of imprisonment was increased, the crime rate was not decreased.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...litate the person who commits the crime.For example, a person who committ serious c...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid doing'.
Suggestion: avoid doing
...o that the person can be re-educate and avoid to do re-offend. However, the person who s...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'crueler' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: crueler
...ffects on the person that they may turn more crueler. Instead, the person should be given th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19711538462 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61371818375 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605769230769 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1348189071 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.111111111 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167170490122 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583856178576 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678791809916 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108791721048 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722239250595 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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