‘Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.’
Although it is sometimes thought that increased prison punishments is one of the best solution to reduce crime, other people think that it can further create more concerns. In my opinion, to control the alarming crime rate we ought to implement multiple strategies.
One the one hand, some people think that criminals are not scared of current law and order as a result they are fearless while committing crimes. Firstly, government should look at the annually crime scenarios and accordingly should extend the prison period for these crimes. For instance, if the crime is minor even then also some days of prison sentence should be given to ensure these people are not indulge in criminal activities in future. Secondly, for serious crimes long prison sentences must be converted to death penalty. This will stop people from crime and will show it is not tolerated. This can be illustrated with example from many gulf countries like Dubai where crime has zero tolerance and death penalties are given in front of public.
On the other hand, we must implement adequate measures to prevent crime situations. Unemployment is the common issue over the world that has resulted in the increased crime rate. Administration should work on creating more job opportunities and police should keep a check on these people. In addition, more rehabilitation centers to be opened so that people who came from prison do not re-offend and are trained on specific skill set to survive. As per recent report from government, 30% of the criminals do crime again after imprisonment as they are left with no other option.
To conclude, adding more prison period will require more infrastructure to manage and might not create fear in criminals mind. I strongly believe investing in creating job opportunities and increasing number of police to prevent crime is need of the hour.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'indulged'.
Suggestion: indulged
...be given to ensure these people are not indulge in criminal activities in future. Secon...
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Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... are not indulge in criminal activities in future. Secondly, for serious crimes long pris...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07817589577 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68396793176 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5667752443 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7632911813 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.933333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17246713017 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620220322848 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394965800689 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114149971872 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509234333671 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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