Some people think that computer games are bad for children while others think that they are beneficial. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some would argue that video games are damaging to children whereas others would say that they bring benefits. While playing too much computer games can harm children’s eyesight, I believe that they allow children to make more friends and have a better social life.
On the one hand, video games can reduce children’s physical vision. Scientists and doctors have proved that any exposure to the UV light from computer monitors can damage some layers of human eyes. Therefore, children’s eyesight will surely be affected if they spend too much time playing games on their computers or TV screens. For example, it is estimated that around 40% of children in the age between twelve and eighteen in Ho Chi Minh City have very bad eyesight due to frequent exposure to computer monitors when playing video games. However, I think that the problem of reduced eyes vision among children can be easily cured by modern medicine.
On the other hand, computer games help children expand their social connections. This is to say, gaming is just another networking platform which allows gamers, who are mostly very young, to connect with each other. Hence, children will be able to establish friendships with other players while playing video games. For instance, a study showed that the average number of friends, that children who played Call of Duty had, was 50 whereas those who did not play only had around five to ten. Personally, I feel that this is a great benefit for children as they can become more confident with their social skills in games and in real life.
In conclusion, although computer games can badly impact on the physical vision of children, these games will definitely boost their social experience both online and in real life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03424657534 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48004798711 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5637104454 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27459297047 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106140496807 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412824536152 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179976327596 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224780624746 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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