Some people think that dangerous spots should be banned, while others think that people should be free to choose. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Lot of people believe that activities which are harmful to human being should be banned. On the contrary, others enjoy facing challenging sports. I strongly support that one should have all the rights to choose their sports. In this essay I will discuss both the point of views.
To begin with, a major part of community wants to live safe and sound life. these people feel that sports like gun shooting, car racing, skiing etc can cause accidents which could result in non-treatable injuries or even death. such person's dependants and family can get destructed in these circumstances.If such kind of dangerous activities are restricted by government, it can save plethora of lives. However, I personally think that not being a part of serious sports, a person can never learn to face their fears.
people who enjoy challenges choose to have career in dangerous games. Stopping them from selecting what they love to do is like cutting their wings. There are many ways to make sure a person's saftey rather than forcing them to avoid challenging games. Firstly, government and recreational centers should provide increased safety gears and they should make these gears affordable and easily available. Secondly, safety rules should be made stringent. health check ups should be done prior and after the sports to make sure the sportsman is safe and fit. Last but not least, more rules should be incorporated in order to eliminate health related risks.
To conclude, I agree that challenging sports can cause life threatening events but public should have choice to select their sports so that they can face their fears and enjoy their activities with raised safety equipments and safety rules.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, kind of, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09677419355 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53731545289 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609318996416 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6191747211 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229104991673 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784759804109 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746413759515 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137752303048 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900681629745 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.