Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
The number of crimes, reported in recent years, has been increasing compared to that of 10-year-old statistics. ensuring the prevension of crimes is thought to be the duty of the government, but then again, many argue that every individual is responsible for self-defense. In this essay, the role of both the government and the citizens will be discussed in relation to reduction of crime occurances, followed by my opinion.
public authority of a country has the responsibility to ensure the safety of the general people, no matter how worse its economic condition is. government agencies collect taxes from the public and provide services in return including social safety and security. The duty of police force, for instance, is not only to catch the criminals and bring to justice, but also to reduce the rate of crimes in general by eradicating the possibilities of prospective wrong-doings. As a lot of agencies are deligated by the government to ensure a crime-free society, the government plays the core responsibilty to prevent crimes in a nation.
though police forces are being tasked to fight the criminals, it is not possible for them to be physically present right in front of the crime scene. As a result, the responsibility of every person of the community is to defend themselves by their own mean. In other words, everyone is liable to defend himself against any threat he faces in his day-to-day life because it is very unlikely that he will get any support from others. Moreover, waiting for the support to come might cost him more than his personal attempt to mitigate the crime. If every individual comes forward to stand against the criminals, the making of a better society is no a dream.
In my opinion, evenif the government of a country is trying their best to wipe-out the crimes from a society, it is the general public who need to come forward to make a difference. The capacity of the government is very limited, so the citizens shall power it up against the fight with the criminals.
To conclude, the increasing number of crimes as well as the criminals is alarming. though government plays the responsibility to protect the countrymen by operating several security agencies, the general people has to be cautious about the crimes as the security forces can not ensure their support at the right time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, well, as to, for instance, in general, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02284263959 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87569724082 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502538071066 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2710433239 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.6875 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243069767143 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728222431046 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544639380767 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134345021023 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490122489102 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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