Some people think that the government should ensure the healthy lifestyle of people, but others argue that it should be decided by individuals..Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent days, there has been a heated discussion on achieving a healthy lifestyle. Some people argue that it is the responsibility of the government to maintain and promote a healthy lifestyle. Whilst others believe that it is an individual responsibility. In this essay, I will provide both the view and justify why I support the latter view.
To begin with, health is considered as wealth. With utmost importance, we must ensure to maintain a healthy lifestyle to keep ourselves fit. One must understand the basic concept of human dietary needs. Individuals are more attracted to fast food due to the fact of fast-paced daily routine. This is due to easy accessibility and economical benefits which saves some quid. However, one must also concentrate on the quality of food and give importance to fresh and naturally made food rather than processed food which will cause harm to health. Moreover, the only individual has to get motivated regularly to maintain the fitness regime.
On the other hand, the government should also take the necessary measure to educate and promote natural food products over processed ones. Dietary charts must be published in public places to create awareness about protein and carbohydrates intake with every meal. Moreover, a lot of funds are allocated for organic and agro-farming. As a result, more and more organic and healthy food is being produced. Although the intention from the government perspective is right towards promoting a healthy lifestyle, it's an individual's responsibility to learn and adapt to healthy food habits.
To recapitulate, I reckon one should always maintain a healthy diet and have a routine fitness habit in order to achieve a healthy lifestyle. As a result, it will help to maintain the overall lifestyle of society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
.... This is due to easy accessibility and economical benefits which saves some quid. However...
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Line 9, column 509, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... towards promoting a healthy lifestyle, its an individuals responsibility to learn ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, as to, i reckon, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20689655172 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9313508957 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0240162297 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8888888889 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208428817696 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582969197885 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564351599574 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131223337411 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620821977357 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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