Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have the freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There are those who believe that hazardous sports should be prohibited. However, numerous arguments have been made in support of the idea that individuals ought to be allowed to participate in any sports they are interested in. This essay discusses both sides of this contentious argument, and then I will give my own perspective.
On the one hand, it is argued that governments should ban extreme sports for several reasons. The main one is that it poses risk to participants’ lives. This is because when those who engage in perilous sports make any mistake, they can be seriously injured or maybe killed. For instance, sports such as boxing, skiing, and mountaineering could cause physical disabilities or even death to athletes. Another reason is that it may cause injuries to spectators. In car races, for example, if the racing car brake fail or tires blowout, this car may dash into spectators and hurt them.
On the other hand, opponents of this view argue that individuals should feel free to do any sports for various reasons. One of the cogent reasons is that dangerous sports create numerous job opportunities for local people. When people have the right to engage in any events suited to their taste irrespective of its risk, the popularity of sports activities will increase. This will result in a large number of tourists visiting the country to watch such activities, and consequently, jobs related to supplying services to these tourists will be created. In addition, extreme sports makes life easier to manage. This is due to the fact that performing feats such as jumping out of an airplane changes the chemical makeup of the mind. As a result, people performing these activities become more capable of staying calm and centered during stressful situations.
In conclusion, I believe both sides of the arguments have their merits. On balance, however, I believe that allowing individuals to do any sports they are interested in brings more benefits such as creating employment opportunities and help them to manage stressful situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14540059347 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85212450628 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560830860534 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4774361775 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19638608251 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596261625975 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542686360866 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116701725902 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344037337949 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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