Some people think governments should spend money on measures to save languages with few speakers from dying out completely Others think this is a waste of financial resources Discuss both views and give your

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Some people think governments should spend money on measures to save languages with few speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your.

Thesedays, some languages are facing a threat of extinction. Therefore, few folks say authorities should allocate funds to save endangered languages while, other assume it is just a waste of money. I believe government should protect dying speeches. This essay will discuss both perceptions before reaching to a feasible conclusion.

To embark, some people support the idea of preserving dying language is that a tougue depicts a culture and a culture is only able to survive till it's language is surviving. Another reason is, to study ancient architecture, literature and medicine it is a necessity to have knowledge about that particular language.To exemplify, there are traces available of surgeries in ancient India.so, one should have expertise is sanskrit to study ancient Indian medcine.

On The flip side, some people treat language as a mere mode of transferring their views or communication. Thus, they do not support idea of preserving endangered languages.In the world of globalisation, the concept of one language-English has been gaining popularity.Therfore,most of the denizens are adopting English language over their mother tounge. Also, they think that there is a crying need in other sectors like health, infrastructure development, and social welfare albeit, government should invest in those.

To sum up, although world is becoming a global-village but government should allocate monetary resources to retain dying languages for the welfare for minority communities.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67111111111 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36782158408 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644444444444 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.3386664727 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.6 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272465781075 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101159707432 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465650628017 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149031344812 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736832541288 0.056905535591 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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