Some people think governments should spend less money on arts and invest more in education.
How far do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Human is the most important element in the wealth of any country. I think it is necessary to invest more budget’s government into schools, educational facilities instead of spending too much money for arts, because once education is developed, other sides of the country, including economy, culture,... are also improved.
Firstly, development of education facilitates decrease in unemployment ratio of a country through improving labor skills, and therefore national economy grows up. As the result of these factors, national income increases and government can have more budgets for others field, such as culture, arts, healthcare… For instances, employees with high skills can make out more valuation, enterprise and personal income increase, they have to pay more tax for government. Government can uses these money to develop country, brings higher standard-living for citizen like investing on arts. Moreover, investing in education also means investing on arts because many arts subjects are taught in schools.
Secondly, building new schools, purchasing educational facilities or supporting for teachers and students in poor rural areas, need a large amount of money. In Vietnam, a lot of students do not have chance to go to school, or they have to stop learning because of tough financial conditions of their family. Besides that, in many undeveloped areas, educational infrastructure is limited, learning resources are incomplete, facilities are too old and need be renewed.
Education effects on many others national fields and plays a role important in development of any country. For these reasons above, I agree that governments should spend less money on arts and invest more in education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: use
...more tax for government. Government can uses these money to develop country, brings ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'these moneys', 'these monies'?
Suggestion: this money; these moneys; these monies
...tax for government. Government can uses these money to develop country, brings higher stand...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'first', 'firstly', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'for instance', 'i think', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.28431372549 0.247107183377 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.147058823529 0.155533422707 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.117647058824 0.0946595960268 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0392156862745 0.0501214627716 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0196078431373 0.0437548338989 45% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140522875817 0.122226691241 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0457516339869 0.0403226058552 113% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.94031182836 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0196078431373 0.0326793684256 60% => OK
Particles: 0.00653594771242 0.00163938923432 399% => OK
Determiners: 0.0457516339869 0.0861772015684 53% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.016339869281 0.021408717616 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1723.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 263.0 316.048096192 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.55133079848 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.444866920152 0.374742101984 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.361216730038 0.28420135186 127% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.296577946768 0.203846283523 145% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.190114068441 0.137316102897 138% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94031182836 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61216730038 0.56093040696 109% => OK
Word variations: 66.0151944419 60.7387585426 109% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 23.9090909091 20.7743622355 115% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.508062023 49.517814964 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.636363636 127.492653851 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7743622355 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 0.814263465372 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 60.0307639129 49.1944974215 122% => OK
Elegance: 2.28571428571 1.69124875643 135% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245988549975 0.332605444948 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122789371698 0.102741220458 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0543087605395 0.0668466124924 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.578264860976 0.534860350844 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138388868074 0.148594505496 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115091917088 0.134430193775 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110472408578 0.0742795772207 149% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.203989882289 0.324371583561 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0415385922718 0.0638462369009 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179476002074 0.228012699653 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111846215424 0.058150111329 192% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.