Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody,
regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to
retire and receive a pension at an earlier age.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?
In the new economies, having a fixed retirement age is being considered as tyrannical and a certain section of working class must be exempted from it. In my opinion, although slacking it for the benefit of a few is a good idea, blanketing a fixed retirement age seems as a fair deal.
There are several reasons why retirement age has been capped. The common factor being the flexibility of changing careers in this day and age. This gives people a chance to relieve themselves off the stressful jobs and switch to a new one, unlike old times with people having single occupations for life. More seriously, an undue benefit would have been availed by many well-off citizens. This over exploitation would have resulted in stripping the economy off its wealth and creating a trouble for the ones having psychologically stressful roles like police officers.
On the other hand, workers involved in manual labour and challenging responsibilities should receive the advantage from early withdrawal from jobs. First are those working in physically demanding conditions such as mines, construction industries, where they might face severe illnesses as a result of inhaling toxic gases and dust or accidents. The others are those in high stress positions where sound judgement is crucial for public safety like emergency medical practitioners and air traffic control operators. giving these people, an early waiver of retirement and pension would give them a chance to relax for the rest of their lives and sometimes public well-being may depend on it.
Overall, I believe that it is imperative to have a common law for all, if the authorities choose to relax it for a few, it would make their lives much easier.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 515, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Giving
...ners and air traffic control operators. giving these people, an early waiver of retire...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, well, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14590747331 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84008953825 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64768683274 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6869950411 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184703855469 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065230830538 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270276913845 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104748089985 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242361930842 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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