Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities.
It is true that in today’s globalized world where we are living in a global village and where the communication between the nations has reached an unprecedented level. This phenomenon has brought a plethora of benefits in terms of both businesses as well as the culture. However, it is also true that to some extent this resulted in the loss of the cultural identity. In my opinion, the benefits of increased communication are many and far outstretches its drawbacks.
There is no denying about the fact that seamless communication does affect the social behavior of the society in certain ways. The globalization has had an enormous influence on the cultural changes in the society. The westernization, for example, has predominantly been acquired by numerous Asian and African countries, this has resulted in the loss of their own culture and civilization. Numerous minority languages have lost their identity due to an increased influence of dominant languages such as English on people’s life. Religious values, Furthermore, will be negatively impacted as a result of easier communication, and the younger generation could be easily brain-washed by the people from the other side of the globe. Social networking, for instance, is a powerful tool used by almost all the world to connect with people across the globe. Due to this, numerous instances have been recorded in the past, where youngsters were involved in international crimes such as drugs trafficking and terrorism.
Increased communication, on the other hand, has brought a plethora of benefits to the society in terms of both businesses as well as the lifestyle of the people. This makes it a compelling trend and is widely acknowledged by all the nations. Firstly, increased communication means better business opportunities and increased profitability to the country. Consequently, the international reputation of the country is enhanced providing a global economic boost. The USA and Israel are known to be the best allies and have a seamless trade and culture communication, as a result, they are successful in establishing best-in-class business platform, benefiting both the nations. Secondly, learning about the lifestyle of people from developed countries helps in inspiring the citizens belonging to under-developed or developing nations in a positive direction. Furthermore, learning about the business in foreign countries will help in opening the opportunities and business horizons of other countries and individuals.
From the above argument, it can be concluded that, albeit the fact that culture and civilization do get impacted by increased communication, it is indispensable for the countries to integrate globally and be a part of international trade, business, and development, and the benefits of this change are many.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...of benefits in terms of both businesses as well as the culture. However, it is also true t...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...the society in terms of both businesses as well as the lifestyle of the people. This makes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2391.0 1615.20841683 148% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48394495413 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34416804841 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490825688073 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 756.9 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8638377707 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.842105263 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9473684211 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2631578947 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215934480603 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614822756991 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424425092934 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12254123686 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542334693919 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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