Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable for them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places?
Living in a rural area is considered to be the best option for children to grow up, while others believe that cities that provide better development and opportunities to the children. I believe a city that could provide a balance of security and greenery is the most suitable place for a child to grow up.
Firstly, living in the countryside allows children to be in contact with nature without any consideration of security. They can help take care of animals and help with gardening. Because of that, they learn how to protect and respect nature. Besides that, they have more freedom to play outside without worrying about safety, while on the other hand in cities, Computers and Smartphones prevent children from such joy. On the other hand, schools are not well equipped with the best technologies and education materials for extra curriculum activities which can hamper the development of a child's talents.
However, schools in the cities are well facilitated with such curriculums and better educational systems. Even if a school does not provide classes for particular sports or arts, it is usually possible to out-source another place in the city which provides the course. As a result, children's' talents can be developed easier and conveniently. On the other hand security and pollution are to be worried about in the cities. The better option would be to develop a city that has a combination of amenities such as parks where children can play and excellent quality of life.
To conclude, growing up in the countryside can be positive for someone's childhood, but the city will usually offer better opportunities for their talents' development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, while, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09523809524 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79813682612 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4845054572 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276899599415 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097666106142 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844672160939 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197985327053 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832440687185 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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