Some people think that it is a good idea to give children a small amount of money each week to spend on what they would like. Other people think that this is wrong and that it is a waste of money.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Spend own pocket money is give things what you desire. Children have their pocket money has generated a debate among many peoples while some people argue that it is waste of money. This essay will look into the pros and corns for that.
Firstly, in recent years, having a pocket money in children life is common now a days. The freedom of spending money on your own will is what every child desire. This freedom enables children to make independent decision on what thing they spend. Moreover, children also show responsibility towards proper utilization of the amount they have. For instance, a research is being conducting with school going children in last year which shows that 60% of students has small amount of money each month to spend with. These children are independent and confident on spending money as compare to other student. Thus, it indicated that it is good for the children having small amount of money with them to purchase desire things.
On the other hand, some people debate that children having money is immoral which lead towards waste of money. Usually, young children have interest in the common stuff which they buy more often like toys which they have already in their house. Moreover, young children also likes to eat chocolates and candies which often lead to bad health. For example, recent medical research shows that childrens having chocolates and candies more often has diabetics. Thus it shows that spending on these type of things lead towards wastage of money.
In the end, I believe that given small amount of money to the children will lead them towards managing their own finance and boost their interest in financial sector like financial accounting, how to manage your funds? etc But these amount should be monitor by parents and have regular check and balance of child spending.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'pocket money'.
Suggestion: pocket money
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: Did you mean 'monitored'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96103896104 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23156604117 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1951907226 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8823529412 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334642256685 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122625600981 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076035946704 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215796414633 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768512064309 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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