Some people think it is a good thing for senior management positions to have very high salaries compared to other workers of the same company or organisation.To what extent do you agree?
Few people think that senior managers paying the huge salaries when compared with the rest of the colleagues. I feel it is obvious to have such variation in the salary as they are more experienced than others.This essay details the supporting points for the same argument.
Firstly, it is obvious that, senior management will have a big asset which is not present with the junior staff of the company i.e. Experience. Being working in the same profession for many years would give the confidence of facing any critical problem at the peak hours. Junior staff will lack this. Their managing skills would really play a key role in making successful business to the company.
Secondly, good packages are being offered to the senior and experienced people as their roles and responsibilities are more and requires more talent, risk and experience when compared with all other team members. The higher the risks involved in executing their jobs, the higher their packages.Thus, they are bounced back with heavy payment.
However, there are other set of the people who will contradict to this statement with opinion that young people work faster and tend to stay for long hours. But, I personally feel that younger people need to gain experience and to work smart rather than working hard as smart work always pays off. Junior staff should take this positively and gain required experience to solve the complex issues and work with dedication to bring a big change in the company.
To summarise,I pen down saying that, company compensates the employees with their work efficiency and complexity. Eventually, the senior management will have more remarkable work to accomplish when compared to others in the team. Thus, they are benefitted with fat cheques of payment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, really, second, secondly, so, thus, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14137931034 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59442602002 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555172413793 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4990827697 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185038063719 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673913297525 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626223428714 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11292984908 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515107770392 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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