Some people think that it is important to let children act independently and make their own decisions from an early age.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
The question of a degree of interference into a child’s life by their parents has always been controversial in many societies. It is argued that letting offspring behave with entire independence as well as make self-planned decisions from their childhood is crucial. I totally disagree with this statement and believe that children are not capable of undertaking vital decisions and they should rely on their mothers and fathers.
Firstly, youngsters can make mistakes due to lack of life experience. This means that a mature person is an individual who has already experienced blacks and whites of this world. Therefore, it is impossible to regard a child as a mature human being, since they have not existed for a sufficient amount of time, when they would have been considered skilled and experienced. For example, according to Moscow State University the majority of people reach their maturity at the age of 25. In other words, children under 18 do not possess an abundance of expertise in regards to life around them.
Secondly, children’s susceptibility to adverse influence should not be underestimated. This is because being young entails psychological difficulties regarding their perception of role models and leaders. Moreover, young people can be prone to commit crimes owing to the fact of their knowledge of the legislation is limited. Similar facts and concepts usually visit their heads only after gaining some maturity. Thus, protecting children from negative impacts is considered paramount for each parent.
In conclusion, I completely disagree with the idea of an increased potential degree of children’s independence because it can lead to indecisive pitfalls that can be exorbitantly expensive for their future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...o not possess an abundance of expertise in regards to life around them. Secondly, children...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44117647059 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05145287025 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632352941176 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0381812055 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272032388666 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830047796769 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579480485568 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157010122119 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510416257966 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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