Some people think that having 1 language in the world is a good thing What are advantages and disadvantages of having 1 language

Essay topics:

Some people think that having 1 language in the world is a good thing. What are advantages and disadvantages of having 1 language?

People are arguing about to have in world the only 1 language, is it a good idea or not. To my mind, I support idea from this statement.

First of all the biggest advantage of this thesis-speaking to each other. It means that people who knows only 1 language do not need to learn something else. Since they will be understood. For example my friend who knows only his native language. Last summer he invited his friend from foreign country, and their conversation was really bad because my friend knows only his language also as his mate.

Second thing is about simplify your life. It means that if in the world we will have 1 language in the world for everyone, conversation between governments or people are going to be much more easily. This is so nice, because the leaders of governments will not have any troubles while they have important conference.

In conclusion I would say that I agree with the statement because only 1 language in the world gives to everyone a lot of advantages. As I already said life of usual people will be much better since they can have a talk to everyone on this planet, and also it makes better life to masters of country’s. They will not waste their time to translate some important documents.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61990950226 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59332474329 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547511312217 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5184467451 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5384615385 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26525423058 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867676936369 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808413508347 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166414258759 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679086115938 0.056905535591 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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