Some people think that it is necessary to travel to other places to learn about other cultures. Others say that books, films and the Internet can be used as a source of information about different cultures.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
"Travelling makes you speechless and turns you into a story-teller" Khalil Gibran. This quote has tried to explain about the benefits of travelling and what sort experience it gives you. Travelling in itself is a school, that turns an individual into a learned person. It completely changes your perception and leaves you mesmerized with the nature and what world has to offer. This essay will highlight the importance travelling has in our life; when it comes to learning about different cultures.
Initially, I used to believe you can only learn from school, professional job or some teacher; but travelling in itself is an expert, when it comes to teaching. Whenever, a person travels from one place to another, he learns about the culture, historical richness and food of that region. An individual can learn million things from what he reads, listens or watches; but he can never witness and feel the culture without visiting that particular place. Travelling in itself is a scholar, which gives you first hand information about any culture around world.
Books, movies and internet can also inform you about different cultures, which are present around the globe. In their limited capacity they try their best to inform viewers and readers about the cultures of the world. An individual cannot deny the role they play. Moreover, reading books and watching different culture on television makes an individual curious to visit that particular place and learn more about the culture.
In my opinion, travelling teaches you more about culture, as a person tends to witness and experience culture himself. While on the other hand, reading books, watching films only make you more curious and can be seen as a motivating factor, to push a person to travel more often. Moreover, an individual can forget, what he learns from book, but he will never forget what he experiences himself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, while, as to, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13870967742 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72379005396 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522580645161 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2694314587 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322189637529 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109774103018 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582607216295 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197886149117 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213060161406 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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