Some people think money is the best gift to give youngsters, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Money is required by all, irrespective of age, for sustainance. A section of the society believes that older children should be given money as a gift, however others are against it. It depends on children’s approach and parents are the best judge to evaluate whether cash should be given to the children or they should provide articles which they require as a gift.
Every child’s phycology is different and based on it parents can choose a suitable gift for them. There is no denying in the fact that these days many youngsters are self-managed wherein they understand the value of money and utilise it cautiously, if a teen is mature enough and he can manage its financials then there is no harm is gifting them with cash as a gift. For instance, last year Delhi girl was awarded with Padma Bhusan for his contribution for his contribution towards the upliftment of society. She started educating slum children at the age of 12 and she, also, bought books for them from her pocket money. An enlightened child like her must be awarded with cash so that it can be better utilised.
Additionally, gifting our youth with cash will eventually them in learning how to manage their finances in their tender age and it will stand them in good stead throughout their life.
On the flip side, immature or spendthrift children must not be gifted with cash has they will waste it in infructuous expenditure. Therefore, guardian must seek their requirement and mindset toward it before fulfilling it with articles. Also, this will save them from going in bad direction as they do not have abundance of cash.
To conclude, parents must analyse their wards spending habit before gifting them with cash. To my mind, children with mature mind should be given money to manage so that learn this skill in initial days.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90032154341 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6361226031 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572347266881 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3278776145 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.857142857 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0720711345395 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304361758574 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272768170136 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0438135483708 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275335253022 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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