Some people think that museums and art galleries should be free of charge for the general public, while others think that museums should charge its visitors. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
Art is considered to be the one of the most inspirational forms of education. Some people support the opinion that art facilities must not charge its visitors, while others believe there should be at least a minimum levy. This essay will discuss why having free entrance to museums is a positive development in regards to educational purposes, but why leaving a minimum fee has a greater impact on all aspects of life.
On the one hand, there are teenagers and students with low or no income at all. It is highly important for their self-development to visit art facilities, galleries for the art learning, mastering sense of beauty and absorbing achievements of outstanding people. Art has always been a good source of new ideas and inspiration for sculptors, composers, painters for centuries. For instance, a student of our college did an amazing musical composition being inspired by marine paintings by Aivazovskyi. So it goes without saying, that the importance of ability to visit these facilities by young and old people cannot be overrated.
On the other hand, exhibitions, art galleries, and other facilities are commonly in a high demand of extra financing and additional independent income might help significantly in their improvement. A recent study found that most of art galleries are in a great lack of money and had to reduce a great number of events dedicated to attract kids, teenagers, students to learn and improve their knowledge about ancient and modern arts. As a result, children lose their interest in arts and focus on less useful activities.
In conclusion, this essay discussed why having art facilities that are free of charge is very beneficial in regards to educational purposes, but why leaving a minimum levy has a greater impact on all aspects of life overall.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
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Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...t are free of charge is very beneficial in regards to educational purposes, but why leaving a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, at least, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08754208754 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96302418057 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589225589226 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9853375155 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.916666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23877612986 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798239558014 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845505389618 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137973492023 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866238673634 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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