Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste. Others think that industries are the ones causing pollution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
One of the highly controversial issues today relates to that of environmental protection. Some people think that the increasing number of vehicles is the main source of pollution in cities, whereas others believe that factories and plants are the major pollutants. This essay will discuss why the role of fossil fuel-powered vehicles is undeniable in terms of polluting, but why industries, such as plants and factories, which emit hazardous fumes and create tons of garbage, should be accounted for the major pollutant in the cities.
Some people claim that cars that run on fossil fuel are responsible for various environmental problems, including air pollution and increasing amount of rubbish in cities. In other words, vehicles with fossil fuel-powered engines emit exhaust fumes, which have detrimental influence on the environment. A recent study found that with the development of engines that run on fossil fuels the emission of carbon dioxide into the air of metropolises around the world increased up to 78%. It goes without saying that vehicles contribute greatly to the pollution of air.
However, I am inclined to believe that although fossil-fueled cars are great contributors to the problems of polluted environment, the main contaminators are factories and plants. In other words, with the production of great amount of goods industries also create tons of toxic waste. What is more, chemical plants, power stations and oil refineries emit enormous amount of hazardous gases, which leads to the increase of carbon footprint and to the greenhouse effect. To illustrate, in Ukraine most factories keep failing to adhere the laws which regulate pollution by breaching the legal limit for air pollution. As a consequence, the air in this country is accounted for the most polluted in Eastern Europe.
To conclude, it is argued by some whether cars are the biggest pollutants on the cities or this role belongs to industries. This essay discussed why vehicles that run on fossil-fueled engines and emit carbon dioxide into the air make a huge contribution into the air pollution, but why industries, such as power stations and oil refineries, should be accounted for the major contaminators and sources of tons of garbage in cities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, whereas, such as, in other words, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27855153203 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94633002885 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487465181058 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2961939082 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.357142857 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6428571429 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184274655809 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723695689642 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614188969479 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119336562218 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301398247844 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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