In contemporary times traffic and transportation issues are growing concern in every country all around the world, especially in the big cities. The main reason behind this is the overpopulation in certain places and the uncontrolled growing number of different types of vehicles. Some people believe that these problems can be solved by migrating people to the cities without being sending to the countrysides. I completely disagree with the statement and in the following paragraphs, I will give arguments on my disagreement.
First of all the effects, in the recent era, most of the big cities are overcrowded with people for different reasons, due to the fact pollutions are increasing day by day. Nowadays the income of the small families of the city is upgraded, therefore the number of the private vehicles are increasing which is the main cause of traffic congestion and the burning fuel increase the air pollution. Moreover, it creates a shortage of parking slots for cars and buses. Furthermore, the amount wastage of fossil fuel is also grown. Hence, migration is not a proper solution to these problems.
Then come to the transportation system, at first, the government and the civic authorities should try to make public transports more convenient and comfortable for the people so that people feel more secure to journey with public transports. In addition, the authorities should distribute and create job opportunities in every corner of the country rather than only in the city, as a consequence, the number of people will distribute around the country, and less the transportation pressure in the city.
In conclusion, the government should take proper measures to design the urban area so that it will be a better habitation for people without being relocating them to the city. To sum up all the points above it is clear that, relocate human beings can not handle these problems.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13826366559 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94314286584 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553054662379 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1206333508 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.923076923 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237780977885 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692388088962 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816582330764 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135283025947 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557540070287 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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