Some people think that parents should give their children complete freedom. Others feel that parents should limit their children's freedom. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Every parent has his own way of raising a child. There has been an increasing debate as to whether children should be encouraged to take part in organised group activities or they should be free to choose their activities on their own in their free time. This essay first discusses the role of various organized activities as part of freedom and secondly analyze why parents should have restrictions on children followed by my opinion.
To begin with, nowadays children select and participate in their interested activities which make them more focused and well-organized. More children are participating in co-curricular activities along with their studies and excel well both in extra activities and studies. This shows that parents give freedom to their offsprings. As a result, this would strengthen the parent-child bond and give the child enough space to experience life.
On the other side, some evidence shows that children are given freedom to spend pocket-money in which they may buy expensive toys, cigarette, drugs, alcohol and may induce in illegal activities at the young age. They cannot concentrate in studies due to distraction of these activities which will affect their future. For example, A recent news about kidnapping of a child by his friends in need of money to celebrate new year and demand money from his parents later killed the child.
To sum up, I believe that, children should be given limited freedom and monitored by their parents often by giving advice about the stranger and friends and not allow to send alone to the friend house or far away from the home. With the limited freedom they will study well and will pass out with flying colors in their future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...ld. There has been an increasing debate as to whether children should be encouraged to take p...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent news'.
Suggestion: Recent news
... will affect their future. For example, A recent news about kidnapping of a child by his frie...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sending'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: sending
... the stranger and friends and not allow to send alone to the friend house or far away f...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for example, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03546099291 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63365144115 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567375886525 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5889172502 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368084561286 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138153363606 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887709764914 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226495381199 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069395678982 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.