Some people think that parents should not give their children expensive presents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples based on you own experience.
Without any iota of doubt, everyone loves receiving gifts, especially during special occasions. This popularity has over the years increased. But some people, on the other side, also claimed that parents should not give their children expensive presents which agree me with that statement because of the following reasons.
First of all, the people who are against the parents who give their sweet hearts such an luxury gifts believe that such habit makes the them extravagant in nature. The children who get habitual of sumptuous gifts do not know the value of money and goods. In addition to that, more money on gifts puts more pressure on monthly expenditure and let you at the risk of financial unstable. For example, if we bought luxury car for kids then it is not only loss of extra earning but also put an extra monthly financial burden like repair and maintenance or petrol expenditure etc.
Secondly, it is also believe that the parents who present their adolescent very ritzy gifts are responsible to make them supercilious. The children who get the habit of these gifts feel proud on them and maintain their status up and weigh every relation like friendship with their status. They try to maintain gap or ignore their relatives or friends who are below to their level. This misconception sometimes creates the discrimination among the society. For example, one of my friends gets expensive gifts from his parents. His other relatives do not have financial strength to buy such expensive stuff. His relatives feel inferior in front of those prestige gifts and this prove to be a recipe for a rift in relationships.
Finally, I would like to say that instead of giving such lineage presents, parents should teach their teenager about the value of money and goods so that they may sustain social relations and contribute to social cohesion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99677419355 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54789909578 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583870967742 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3416209255 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.266666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218301196938 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669244234012 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679845974575 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136196161196 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052855219715 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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