Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children, while others think parents need not do that, as children can read books, watch TV or movies by themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Parents always watch every step of children. Hence, there is a fair amount of parents believe that they should read book or tell stories to their daughter or son. However, others are confident that children could do it by themselves. In my opinion, I agree that father or mother need to spend time to teach children about stories. This essay is going to discuss both views and argue why I support the opinion mentioned above.
It has been argued that reading book for children is necessary because of two reasons. Firstly, this is one of ways to increase connection between parents and children, especially in current busy world. Most of people have a lot of work to do, relationships between family members will be loosen. Therefore, discovering books together is a great option to talk and to get closer with children at home. Secondly, while reading books, this is a great opportunity for parents to teach and explain more lesson to children. Young generation nowadays is smart but they are too young to understand clearly contents mentioned in books, so right explanation will be given by their parents through book pages.
On the other hand, I agree with the point that children have full ability to read books or watch TV without adult monitoring. Firstly, reading books by themselves is to allow them to have their own thought. Adults have different understanding about the book contents, they should not apply their thought to children. Let allow children to have their own understanding to think differently. Secondly, doing something without controls helps children to develop their independency. Youngster should learn how to do everything without the helps from older generations even reading book.
In conclusion, this essay not only discussed both sides, but it also gave my opinion about those arguments. I highly encourage children to be independent in all their daily activities, including reading books, watching TV, or films.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 204, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...dren, especially in current busy world. Most of people have a lot of work to do, relationships...
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Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'understanding thinking'.
Suggestion: understanding thinking
...n. Let allow children to have their own understanding to think differently. Secondly, doing something ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11285266458 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68254681761 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2986966093 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.8421052632 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7894736842 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421323201641 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125485709214 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495161276396 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248555204391 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757035401822 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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