Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days, there is an ongoing debate on whether is the parent or school's responsibility to educate children to become a better person in the society. Although, most of the people argued that school should held full responsibility on the character of it's students, I strongly disagree on that viewpoint. In my opinion, the responsibility lies on the parents to ensure the well-being of their children.
At school, children are often exposed to new things and people. Teachers are their mentors or guidances throughout their studies providing knowledge and ensuring good behavior among the children. In other words, the school helps parents to take care of their children while they are working. Although, teachers have some level of responsibility towards the behavior of the children, they should not be blamed if the students are not obedient. Schools are just assisting parents on the process of educating their children.
On the other hand, parents are ultimately responsible for their children's behavior. In most cases, kids will treat their parents as role models in life. Furthermore, they will often follow the footsteps of their parents. For instances, if parents smoke in front of the kids, eventually they will become smokers due to the influence of their parents. This creates a negative impact to the children growth and altered the understanding on certain matters in life.
To conclude, schools are merely assisting parents on educating children with knowledge and good behaviors. The parents held full responsibility of their children's affairs to ensure they are good members in the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e they are good members in the society.
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Discourse Markers used:
['furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for instance', 'in most cases', 'in my opinion', 'in other words', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.284210526316 0.247107183377 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.136842105263 0.155533422707 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.059649122807 0.0946595960268 63% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0350877192982 0.0501214627716 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0631578947368 0.0437548338989 144% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.147368421053 0.122226691241 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0315789473684 0.0403226058552 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83178070012 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0315789473684 0.0326793684256 97% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0982456140351 0.0861772015684 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0175438596491 0.021408717616 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1621.0 1933.35771543 84% => OK
No of words: 256.0 316.048096192 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.33203125 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.42578125 0.374742101984 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.3359375 0.28420135186 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2265625 0.203846283523 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1484375 0.137316102897 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83178070012 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.037074148 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.56093040696 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.1427540157 60.7387585426 81% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0666666667 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1747502981 49.517814964 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.066666667 127.492653851 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 50.6604166667 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.97014925373 1.69124875643 116% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313406249469 0.332605444948 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130598078912 0.102741220458 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.056934394201 0.0668466124924 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.590998447074 0.534860350844 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.103708016089 0.148594505496 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145380703194 0.134430193775 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517539263926 0.0742795772207 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.423275344339 0.324371583561 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0261757353596 0.0638462369009 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233701559811 0.228012699653 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289386300033 0.058150111329 50% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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