Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Whilst some people argue that care takers are exclusively responsible for upbringing their offspring to be good citizens because parents has moral obligation to do so, others, including myself, of the belief that this commitment ought to be held to teachers simply because they are professional in this field of experience.
On the one hand, those who believe it is parents' role would argue that fathers and mothers have the moral, social and even legal obligation to raise their children to be well-behaved and good-mannered. this would not be complicated or sophisticated mission If they only act like role models at home while dealing with their loved ones in day-to-day interactions. For example, a recent survey conducted by " Care for Children" organization in the USA on 1000 of youngsters who actively participated in charity and humanitarian campaigns revealed that 90% of the participants' motives were because of their parents' influence. Despite this tremendous impact on young people, I do believe it is a marginal role, while the major one is to be played by our educational system.
This is because teachers are trained and qualified to nurture their pupils so that they instill the code of conduct and set up ground rules for their students which can lead to good citizens as an outcome to this planned efforts. A teacher often has to have at least a bachelor's degree in educational methodologies and he is well qualified and equipped with all training courses by which he can perform such an quintessential task for the best advantage of the new generations and the society in whole. For instance, in Norway, the school curriculum for primary school has 50% of subjects interrelate to how to help the needy people, and how to be a good citizen. In addition to this, teachers cannot be permitted to start their career unless they undergo to rigorous training programs about ethics and morals of European code of conduct. Given that the crime rate in Oslo is the lowest all over the world and the highest number of pupils to participate in Climate Change campaign organised by BBC Natural Reserve last year was from Norway, it prove that teachers' effectiveness is undoubtedly proven.
Having illustrated the aforementioned ideas and examples, it can be concluded that although the parents has an integrated role they must play in this arena, educationists' involvement is much more far important because they more capable to accomplished the process of nurturing children to be a pride of their nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, well, while, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2122.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08872901679 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93001601965 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3119647768 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 192.909090909 106.682146367 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.9090909091 20.7667163134 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201536565288 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806692506168 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048153432108 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129159885111 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274170488053 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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