Currently, in most countries for almost all professions the age for retirement is set at 60 years, barring a few exceptions. While some agree with this age limit, others are of the opinion that a retirement age should not be set, but rather left to an individuals personal choice. In my view, I agree that a retirement age should be set at 60 years so as to make way for younger generations and also encourages people to enjoy the fruit of their hard-work.
To begin with, if people are given a choice to work without any upper age limit it can prove to have serious consequences on their health. In absence of a rule, people will continue working without thinking about the repercussions on themselves as well as the society at large. For example, if an old bus driver who has a problem with his eyesight continues driving without any restrictions, the lives of the passengers are put at risk. Therefore, laying down retirement policies is not only a favorable but is also a necessity.
On the contrary, making it compulsory to retire enable people being promoted, to fill in the empty positions, thus, creating more employment opportunities for younger generations. Moreover, the people who have retired are paid a handsome gratuity along with pension to lead their lives comfortably. Due to the rising number of unemployment, enforcing retirement will bring down that count down and strike a balance in society. One can always reach out to an old ex employee to seek guidance or in case of doubt.
In conclusion, does being retired mean being redundant? No! it simply means the end of one journey and the beginning of another. Since, work occupies a major portion of one's life, after retirement one can pursue their hobbies or develop a skill or undertake a task which has been long overdue!
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an individual; individuals
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Message: Use simply 'to'
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Suggestion:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...Since, work occupies a major portion of ones life, after retirement one can pursue t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my view, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81935483871 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7957824636 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606451612903 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5337263304 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.714285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21378185193 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688360501976 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601088497896 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117980785125 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541812189315 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.