Some people think that people who are over 60 years old should not work ans should be made to retire. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the passing age, capabilities of human beings goes on decreasing due to which their efficiency a work also get effected. This why the governments and private companies have set the retiring age between 58 and 60 years. But, in my opinion I am partly in accord with this notion that after 60 people should made to retire from jobs.
To embark on, the first reason for substantiating this statement is that if old people holds their position's even after age of 60, there will be no vacancy for young people. Hence, it will result in upraising the problem of unemployment, which is already haunting the youth of our country. Secondly, the age of senior citizens inhibits in their work, which can instigate some serious losses to a company. Lastly, at this age people become more rigid and they lose there flexibility to adapt to any change in work, further hampering their performance.
On the flip side, sometimes people are sole bread earner in their homes, so if such people are retired can be major setback to them. Furthermore, due to their prolonged services, old people are highly experienced, therefore they become assets of the company. In such cases, instead of relieving them, they should be kept as patron or mentor to training and guiding young staff to bring out best of them.
To conclude, I would like to say some it very hard to retire people after age of 60 years, but to give chance to new and young people they should be retired.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72941176471 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49648426379 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61568627451 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.1909851408 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.636363636 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236596918459 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905231584243 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612509548663 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158747055471 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399903284155 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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