Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Sports are one of the activities which are known to showcase your prowess. Even though some people believe that mental strength is crucial to winning a sports competition, others argue that endurance is primitive factor to be successful in it. This essay will discuss both views, but I truly believe that the combinations and proper balance of these two things can be really beneficial to achieve the pinnacle in sports activities.
Certainly, sports such as running, shot put, and swimming require a great deal of strength. Indeed, individuals who do not have an ample amount of energy can not last for a longer period of time. In India, for instance, when committee selects a person for a sports tournament, they ask the participants to run 800-meter in a 400-meter race to check for their muscle power. If they are unable to reach that threshold, selectors disqualify them even in the preliminary rounds. Therefore, it is a vital requirement for a successful sportsperson.
Despite being physically fitness, a person also needs to be mentally fit to gain popularity in such a sports league. Sports such as wrestling, shooting, and archery need the competitor to exhibit mental toughness as these sports contain the numbers of rounds to qualify for the final competitive match. However, they do need to utilise muscle strength for long-time standing tasks. In order to qualify, these sports activities emphasise more on perseverance. So, It is significantly important to have a strong mental state to become an eminent game player.
In conclusion, both traits are really important to set a precedence in the sports arena. Limiting only to physical strength will not be suffice for certain numbers of sports, and gaining the same will not be enough for others though.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...unt of energy can not last for a longer period of time. In India, for instance, when committee...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
..., when committee selects a person for a sports tournament, they ask the participants t...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10996563574 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83729787088 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8369321161 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279894090328 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847577739314 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498663376929 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165378815767 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364981824423 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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