Some people think that schools should teach students to understand about right wrong and good behaviour instead of this being only parents responsibility Do you agree or disagree with this statement

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Some people think that schools should teach students to understand about right, wrong and good behaviour instead of this being only parents’ responsibility. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

School is a place where students learn both academic skill and moral values. Schools are responsible for pupil’s overall fundamental development. Therefore, I also agree with the statement that teacher should also teach their students to understand about right, wrong and good behaviour.

The two places where children can grasp the maximum knowledge are home and school. Children basically learn about behaviour patterns and social interaction, but school provides tremendous knowledge in this regard. Also, education institution is a place where they spend a lot time with their teachers and mate. Therefore, the attitude and manner, which the young students see from their surrounding (form teacher and classmate), stimulus to them to behave in same manner. Consequently, spreading the atmosphere of honesty, decency, politeness and generosity across the school are overarching so that these etiquettes can be crammed into children to the brim. For instance, my uncle’s daughter is just studying 5th class, but she respects the elderly people. Since her mentors taught these qualities which she must inculcate in her.

In addition to above, in modern epoch parents of young generation are so busy in earnings that they hardly give the time to their lover. Hence they expect from the institution that in addition to the academic knowledge their children are also taught the civic sense regarding friendly attitude, maintaining the decorum of places like gardens or historical places etc. Furthermore, the parents only are not proving to be effective because demeanour patterns are sometimes being followed wrongly in household. For example, children observe certain acts of their family like talking in a loud tone, spitting on roads, being late for work and so on. Resultantly, they too might pick all these things up. This is why behavioural studies should be handled by school teachers as well.

In conclusion, i would say that a teacher would help imbibe ethical principal in children and also help correct any wrong ones that the child may have picked on. Therefore, schools along with other subjects also teach good behaviour.

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Average: 9.2 (6 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39169139466 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69557417929 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59940652819 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1578076806 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.944444444 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237290053927 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767449920481 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092045009637 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159423901598 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867763343236 0.056905535591 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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