Some people think that showing sporting events on the television such as Olympics and World Cup tournaments can be the best way to encourage adults to do exercise. Others believe there are other effective ways to do so.
Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Although exercise is crucial need of today's era, most of the people do not consider it to be an essential part of routine. A section of society believes in promoting the sporting events to motivate the population on exercising, while others think that there can be several ways to inspire youth to take part in exercise regime on regular basis. I support the latter group, believing the Government policies and aids to play major role
According to the former group, humans have mindset to follow the famous sport stars and because of this reason they think most people would indulge themselves into exercise by viewing the cricketers and other sport stars on broadcasting channels. Generally, youngsters would imitate their favorite athletes and would exercise to build strength and body like them, but this cannot last long as it requires time and money. The champions in sporting events like Olympics and International tournaments have their career in sport and games; so, they are focused on keeping themselves fit. However, the general public cannot continue to spend that much time and money as they have other routines to follow.
Alternatively, if the administrative bodies contributes to the welfare of the society by establishing fitness centers and gyms then most of the country's citizens would get motivated to take benefit. The policies can also be framed to encourage the country's youth in participating in games and sports. Such initiatives can even help the adolescent to see the career in it. As a result, these steps would create world-wide interest in exercise program and new generation would be seen fit and healthy.
In conclusion, government initiatives can help enormously to cultivate exercise habit into people. The sporting events cannot be that fruitful as people do not always take things completely out of admiration. For few days they would follow; however, would not follow it on daily basis. Therefore, the higher authorities should think of providing free sporting centers and clubs in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22492401216 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72914478577 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565349544073 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.3991707296 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.785714286 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214410322577 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701767122322 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588208448796 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12652182126 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045666249969 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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