Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Mentor’s role is very important in our life. Few individuals believe that guide should take charge of educating the right judgements to his students which can help them to be disciplined. While on the other hand, others do not agree and say that academic part is the only responsibility of a guru. In this essay, both the ways will be discussed in the following paragraphs in detail.
Firstly, Guidance is very important in our life and Teacher is the best person who can guide us on the right path. Teachers are well aware of students potential and capabilities. They know when is the right time to guide a student and how. Guidance about life goals and behaviour from the mentor can help the individual to understand the difference and allow him to choose one particular direction in which he can make career prospects.
Secondly, Restrict teacher to only academic part also has its own benefits. Educator will be more focused on academics. Which can overall be more professional level and maintain the discipline between the students and teachers. Moreover, the mentor cannot have his personal interest at that point. To illustrate, some teachers wanted their students to be like them or like to study according to their own wish rather than students choice.
In conclusion, the guide and student relationship should be more professional than friendly. In my opinion, the mentor should be more professional to keep his personal interest way from his students and primarily should be focused on academics. Students can learn the judgements and right ways to take a decision in other ways as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02611940299 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78643915238 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533582089552 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5331172469 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1875 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318691691171 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104274875905 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582737571456 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197352537941 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270703696861 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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