Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Other think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities .Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Other think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities .
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There is acute intellectual discussion over the happiest tenure of life whether that is in teenage years or adult period. However both views have their merits and demerits and in further discussion both views are going to be discussed with their due reasons and intends.

In begin with first view, teenage is a period which no obligation for earning of money and run their and families lives. In addition, teenagers are depend upon their parents for their petty requirement also. Though , this is much more career concentrated time, teenagers enjoy with their friends and family members in leisure timings and enjoy the moments. Moreover, for adolescents have all the required things are achievable by compelling their parents. For instance, latest mobile, motor cycles and much more gadgets. And also, college and school periods with friend are ever beautiful days, these days become life time remember days.

On other side, adult is a age of full of responsibilities but people think that in this tenure an adult have much more freedom to use money because they earn his/ her self. Also, they can go for excursions with their families and friend s on the holidays at countrywide and all these thing can be happened due to only by own earnings. Moreover, in adult age a person gets marriage and next fortune he or she becomes parents and in this period enjoys lovable company of spouse and bliss- able nurturing of their offspring.

In my view , though there are both side positive marks but would go with first view because adolescent age is more relax and free from obligation, they have no pressure to earn moreover in teenage a teenager can enjoy company with friends because in later on due to hectic and responsible works and he/ she could not meet friends in such warmly. Other hand , adult age has tremendous take care of parents ,children and fulfil the wishes.

In the sum up, it is articulately said that the age of teenagers, the age of school and college life and it is golden era. In comparison with adult period which is responsibility and loyalty

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in my view']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.301298701299 0.247107183377 122% => OK
Verbs: 0.122077922078 0.155533422707 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0909090909091 0.0946595960268 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0493506493506 0.0501214627716 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0493506493506 0.0437548338989 113% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132467532468 0.122226691241 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0103896103896 0.0403226058552 26% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.50828698478 2.80594681477 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.012987012987 0.0326793684256 40% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0623376623377 0.0861772015684 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.012987012987 0.021408717616 61% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00519480519481 0.011925033212 44% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2092.0 1933.35771543 108% => OK
No of words: 356.0 316.048096192 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87640449438 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.311797752809 0.374742101984 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.233146067416 0.28420135186 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.137640449438 0.203846283523 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0898876404494 0.137316102897 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50828698478 2.80594681477 89% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.037074148 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.56093040696 96% => OK
Word variations: 58.7888313409 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.7333333333 20.7743622355 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4042836637 49.517814964 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.466666667 127.492653851 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7333333333 20.7743622355 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 3.99599198397 701% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.0479400749 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 2.01176470588 1.69124875643 119% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321782638886 0.332605444948 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0851336027825 0.102741220458 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0546859303491 0.0668466124924 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.545955671206 0.534860350844 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161745591945 0.148594505496 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125795268652 0.134430193775 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662092080732 0.0742795772207 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.339024229034 0.324371583561 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0437237247555 0.0638462369009 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212558767891 0.228012699653 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434418661376 0.058150111329 75% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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