Some people think that the teenager years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, inspite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, most individuals have various opinions about what time they feel happy. While some people believe that teenagers are the most cheerful period that they experience, I side with those who agree that we can find out what happiness is during adult life.
To begin with, there are several reasons teenagers are the happiest times, and one of them is exploring many opportunities. It is the period in which we can explore and try anything, new without scaring, making mistakes, and the judgment of anyone so that they can regret about anything they didn't do after they grow up. For instance, according to recent studies, eight of ten adults over 50 years ago said that they were much happier when they were between 12-17 years old. Moreover, youngsters seem to have a low level of both pressure and responsibility at this time, so it can contribute to more delightful moments and happiest times. Many of the hardships barely touch them and they have big dreams in life which make them happier than most adults.
However, being an adult can bring a happy life for them relying on several reasons, and one of them is dependence on the economy. It creates a power to decide what they do with their life, which means that adults can do anything they want without borrowing money from their parents. For instance, some American adults can retire at the age of 30 to 40 with a high net worth. Moreover, Responsibilities often come with great pleasure, which leads to a more fulfilling and happy adult life. Paying for children's tuition fees, buying them gifts, taking the family to a dream holiday destination, paying bills, and helping others bring immeasurable joys to life.
To conclude, although some people agree with the view, that childhood is always a happy stage for them, other individuals believe that adult life can bring a high level of fulfillment. However, I strongly believe that most adults have to feel satisfied with their current life despite missing anything from their childhood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92625368732 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49066792283 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551622418879 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5206302605 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.285714286 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214031110314 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083723455312 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549856925203 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149051740958 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364952557144 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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