Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
With the proliferation of contemporary society comes a wide range of development in modern society. Indeed, the question of whether pollution from noise should be controlled strictly by some laws remains a source of controversy. Although increasing noise from industrial revolution is beneficial to some extents, I would argue that people should reduce noise as much as they can offer more advantage.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people can make as much noise as they want.
Firstly, freedom to producing noise is sometimes considered the human right.
• To be more specific, in some special events such as birthday celebrations, the noise from party is accepted in the current society.
• In addition, making sounds is often one of the behavior especially small children or teenager from school.
• As a result of this making noise provides enjoyment among people obviously during joyfull occasion. It helps to ventilate one’s emotions, particularly anger and sorrow.
Secondly, The noise pollution comes from the acceleration of industrialization and modernization process.
When people manufacture processing products These personal contacts can be a great benefit for them in the further career.
On the other hand, I believe that in spite of various advantages of taking part in a small enterprise, working for a large company result in more favorable outcomes, the most obvious of which are relatedto job security and the improvement in specialised knowledge.
• With regard to the former, the employees of large firms will enjoy a higher degree of job security.
• This is due to the fact that profitable companies are less likely to go bankrupt than small start-up operations.
• Another advantage is that large enterprises tend to have well-developed training programs, which are designed to provide the knowledge in certain fields for their employees. This may help them to obtain plenty of essential skills in their chosen profession.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
... development in modern society. Indeed, the question of whether pollution from noise should be controll...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, such as, as a result, in spite of, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39936102236 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96268993791 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607028753994 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4868512996 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.625 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201406718631 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605064826046 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772566292887 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653891685866 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796306346208 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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