Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about the methods to control noise. While some people think that they have the freedom to make noise as they like. I believe that reducing or restricting noise are better.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why several people believe that they have authorize to decide noise ‘s limit. Firstly, the amount of people feel to satisfy when they create much noise in private activities or entertainment. For example, amplifying sound when they sing their favorite songs help them feeling relaxed after a long wearied day although these things disturb neighbors. Secondly, people often consider noise as a part of the industrialization and modernization process. For instance, traffic noise. We can not restrict vehicle although we know that they cause bad affections for healthy.
On the others hand, I would argue that the government should have regulations about the degree of the time and the noise. First the authorized people should have policies to ban making noise in particular time such as in the afternoon from 12 o’clock to 1 pm or in the evening after 11 pm. It is because that is a period time to rest. In addition, the government should ban the drivers to use the horn which is louder because of safety of people who attend traffic. People can startle which cause accidents when they hear the horn suddenly.
In conclusion, although every individual prefer making noise in their desire. In my opinion people should have degree to make noisy that it do not affect with people who around them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'authorized'.
Suggestion: authorized
...y several people believe that they have authorize to decide noise 's limit. Firstly,...
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Line 2, column 96, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'deciding'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'authorize' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: deciding
...people believe that they have authorize to decide noise 's limit. Firstly, the amoun...
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Line 2, column 317, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to feel' or 'feel'.
Suggestion: to feel; feel
...hey sing their favorite songs help them feeling relaxed after a long wearied day althou...
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Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ave degree to make noisy that it do not affect with people who around them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97307692308 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57064389972 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573076923077 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5096883102 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8125 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307184878894 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994550690605 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870066511355 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203011280317 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102700637455 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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