Some people think that the universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main fuction of a university.
In this day and age, most university provide a different goals for each student to reach. While some people belive that they should provide educators on learning the ability which is helpful for their career, I side with those who agree that most individuals need to be contributed to any knowledge by higher education.
On the one hand, there are many reason why university should provide the ability for students to do any job after graduate. First of all, it is argue that these young individuals can learn the knowledge or skill in their faculty, so there can have a lot of benefit for them in their future career. For example, one of the knowledge that a scholar can study in any college is a team-work ability. Others reason is that the university will rise their reputation and attract many candidate to appy for learning if the proportion of student, who have a bright career after learning in it, is high enough annually. Therefore, many parents cannot worry about choosing to learn in these colleges.
However, it is several reason why prove that the main function of university is contribute the knowledge for each students. The main one of them is that because some job has require candidate who has a high mark at university, so it is essential for a scholar to receive a knowledge provided by their university. For example, some young individuals learning in a Mathematics Department always have a chance to become a Mathematician in a Institute if they gain a high certificate. Moreover, students may spend their times to put an effort in learning any subject because of a huge level of comprehension in these lecture, which means that it can create a motivation for them to reach a goal if they try hard on every factor of their life.
To conclude, although some individuals believe that the main fuction of university is contributing a tool for students for their future career, the supporter of providing academic knowledge agree that it may be the efficient method for students to reach their goals. However, I believe that any teacher serving in higher education should teach an intellectual skill for any scholars in order to make them have any opportunity to do their expected job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'goal'?
Suggestion: goal
...ge, most university provide a different goals for each student to reach. While some p...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'argued'.
Suggestion: argued
...job after graduate. First of all, it is argue that these young individuals can learn ...
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Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun candidate seems to be countable; consider using: 'many candidates'.
Suggestion: many candidates
... will rise their reputation and attract many candidate to appy for learning if the proportion ...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'contributed'.
Suggestion: contributed
...that the main function of university is contribute the knowledge for each students. The ma...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...ne of them is that because some job has require candidate who has a high mark at univer...
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Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e a chance to become a Mathematician in a Institute if they gain a high certifica...
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y factor of their life. To conclude, although some individuals believe that t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85978835979 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73867284248 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473544973545 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3840764307 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.307692308 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0769230769 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220695947124 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094121773061 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580046093274 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164238118211 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407062439585 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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