Some people think that young people should choose their profession by themselves. Other believe that their parents choose for them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
<!--break-->Selecting a profession is indeed a challenging decision for young generation. Some individuals argue that youth should take this decision by their own, while others think that parent should be responsible in selecting their career. In my opinion, youngster of this century are extremely knowledgeable and can decide future endeavors for themselves.
To begin with, adults are highly qualified as well as intelligent. Due to their intelligence, they can determine which profession can provide better opportunities and high income in long run. In addition, young people are much aware about the technology, they get pivotal information about businesses and markets via internet which helps them to achieve their professional goal. For instance, a graduate passed from business school utilize the factual information before accepting any job offer. Hence, I think new generation should take decision about their profession.
On the flip side, parent gain their experiences with time which are also crucial. They tend to be a mentor and make sure their children earn well by giving them expert advice. This advice helps them in finding best profession among different lucrative offers. For instance, my father encouraged me to find a job in banking sector because he is a financial advisor and this field is highly promising in the future. Therefore, children should get knowledge from their parents based upon their past experiences.
In a nutshell, young professionals should take their career decision by their own as they keep update about current trends in economy but also should consult with their parents regarding opting the specific profession.<!--break-->
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'finding the best'.
Suggestion: finding the best
...xpert advice. This advice helps them in finding best profession among different lucrative of...
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Line 5, column 381, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...e is a financial advisor and this field is highly promising in the future. Therefore, children shou...
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Line 5, column 493, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...dge from their parents based upon their past experiences. In a nutshell, young professionals ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i think, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56031128405 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13027220329 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630350194553 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4622516659 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.071428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324883012951 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104083075263 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697863553466 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20365468303 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434912029782 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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