These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Every family tends to live a quality life and earn more money. To achieve this, they move outside to foreign nations. While some individuals think that this trend is in the favor of children of these families, rest of the people opine that this create more difficulties in their lives.In my opinion, it is a sensible decision to move out of the country to find better career opportunities.
On the one side of argument, it is becoming essential to move abroad for a good compensation and better future for the children. An individual can provide all necessary amenities to his child only if he earns well. For example,financially well parents can provide high standard education to their children. Moreover, it also has been observed that children which are born in poor family often indulge in bad habits which subsequently impact their future. Therefore, it seems right decision for families to settle down abroad for their children's better life
On the flip side, there are several reasons due to which lives of family members become more challenging when they settle abroad. Major difficulty they encounter is cultural gap. Sometimes, people do not find the cooperative environment in their workplace because native countrymen speak in their own language which is difficult to understand by foreign employee. In addition, environmental conditions also create problem for new families. For instance, during harsh whether conditions people fall sick when they move into other country.
In a nutshell, doing a work in new country or settling down there enhance the living standard of family. People also face certain difficulties while they encounter new culture but these problems get vanish as the time pass. Overall, decision to move abroad for an employment proves beneficial for families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24221453287 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79170785346 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612456747405 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3871350424 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30376602637 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910776992547 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567685899452 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18355303576 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391985973631 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.