With the inception of globalization came the desire to live the wonderful life and to fulfil their dreams to have a splendid lifestyle, people migrate from one country to another. In search of better lives, they often forget that their move will also affect other lives which are connected to them. Moreover, there is a conflict of thoughts between some people. While some of the migrants think that migrating to a different country will not only bring the prosperity to the family but will also be beneficial for the children’s future, others have contradicted thoughts.
Firstly, when youngsters move to a different country, adjusting to a completely new environment becomes a hardened situation for them. Furthermore, they often have to leave behind their friends, home and school during migration, which impact them physiologically. Not all of them usually are successful in adopting the new way of life and become distant.
Next, language barrier is one of the other crucial factors to consider. Children moving from one country to another may not always to be fluent in many languages and this creates a language barrier as they are unable to communicate with others, hence they are unable to befriend with other children. Such children’s contacts largely remain limited to their family, which eventually make them aloof and depressed.
Lastly, having said so, migration may always not be termed as a move with only detrimental results. Though, children may face multiple issues in a different country but once settled, tackling these issues only makes them more confident. Apart from this, they also get to experience new culture and better way of living.
In essence, migration may have some short term adverse effects on youngsters’ lives but benefits from it overshadow them. In my opinion, parents should ensure to take care of their children’s need while taking this step and should also ensure that they are receiving proper support in the initial years of migration.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 369, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... of thoughts between some people. While some of the migrants think that migrating to a diff...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are usually
...t them physiologically. Not all of them usually are successful in adopting the new way of l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, while, apart from, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25776397516 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81735905696 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568322981366 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6076159028 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.866666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177553776297 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565165226771 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314179533837 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955899283912 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327828615809 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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