These days many families move abroad for work. Some people believe that this benefits the children in these families. Others believe that it makes their lives more difficult.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, a significant number of families immigrate to foreign countries in pursuit of more job opportunities. While some people assert this trend is beneficial for dependent offspring, others opine that this venture brings more difficulties to the children. This essay seeks to investigate both mentioned viewpoint, followed by my own perception.
On the one hand, there are a plethora of advantages to support the former group’s perspective. First and perhaps the most lucrative point is that children alongside their families, escape the challenges of their home country. To elaborate, there are many problems, including unemployment that forces families to move abroad; hence, these children will find it easier to find a job. Moreover, immigrant children are more successful in climbing the ladder of their career even compared to natives. Statistics show that the unemployment rate among bilingual adults who immigrated when they were children is less than 20 percent, additionally, they hold more pivotal positions in various fields.
On the other hand, the latter group claim that moving to another country during childhood has its share of drawbacks. Immigration has almost an unbearable negative physiological effect on them because children have to get acquainted with a new culture. To illustrate, latest researches conducted by A.B.C university prove that one of the major causes of childhood depression is the cultural and language barrier to immigration. Furthermore, they have to abandon their school and friends which adds to the mentioned problem.
To recapitulate, while both sides have indisputable points in defending their viewpoints. From my notion, for children, the merits of moving abroad outweigh the demerits they will have a brighter future due to the ampler availability of job opportunities and elimination of old country’s problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63732394366 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08587941365 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658450704225 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9439032773 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.357142857 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225697289047 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672797436471 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532834652897 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125765689068 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590645783293 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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