Some say that people living in high rise apartments are lonely and unhappy while others say that it is advantageous to stay in high rise apartments. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Majority of masses argue that the public residing in high tower apartments are feeling sad and in a state of isolation whereas opponents contend that it is beneficial to live in these vertical homes. In my opinion, these types of housing are effective in connecting people through social gatherings and they have a plethora of facilities which attract people toward these towers.
To begin with, the high residential building assists to establish new relationships with other individuals and organise social gatherings for entertainment. This leads to better understanding and developing brotherhood between members of the society. For example, numerous types of sports and cultural events are organised by the members of society, where different families can participate for enjoyment and to make new connections. Moreover, there are other attractive facilities available in these penthouses which provide liveable and comfortable life to the people such as physical health centres, restaurants, medical health facilities and security. Consequently, availability of such basic amenities under one roof and peaceful neighborhood would be favourable to live in such a vertical housing society.
Although it fulfilled the expectation of most of the people, the elderly people face challenges in these high rise apartments. The old people are unable to climb the stairs if the lift not working in situations of electricity failure. Furthermore these constructions are usually congested or less spacious rooms. As a result, only nuclear families may reside in these apartments. However, these implications will not overshadow the advantages of the high rise buildings.
Overall, somewhere these high structure buildings are not in favour of elderly people. Nevertheless, these high residential flats are effective in establishing companionship or fellowship between people and are able to provide ample adequate facilities to all members of building.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, whereas, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74827586207 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12171825304 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589655172414 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4784854638 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.230769231 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159305755085 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601739299044 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542144865163 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099786348478 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324434383956 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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