Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of and give your own opinion.
Marriage is a most beautiful and special event of our life and choosing a right life partner is the most critical decision of our life. It is commonly believed by many that we should marry for love. However, some people defend this belief and says it is rational to marry for money. This essay examines both these views and present my opinion about the same.
To begin with, when someone marries for love then he could fight with almost all the curses of world through his power of love. Getting married for love gives you courage to deal with any situation as a team together. We have the physical and emotional support always, that makes us psychological strong and confident. When there is love and respect in relation, there is openness, frankness and happiness which are the most important foundations of any relation.
However, on the other side, marry for money is also wiser in some situation. For example, marrying a government employee is considered a wise decision in India because the person through his financial status could fulfil your desires to a great extent. You do not have to struggle or sacrifice something and may live rest of your life smoothly and stress free as you know the future is secure financially.
In my opinion, I would suggest marry for love because although, money can buy anything but it could not buy you happiness and love. It is better to live happy and poor rather than miserable and rich. In a survey conducted by Delhi University on fifteen hundred rich couples, surprisingly only twenty percent of them were happy in their life although they all enjoy luxurious lifestyle. In short, love is strong and an irreplaceable part of healthy married life.
In conclusion, wedding is an auspicious event and we could choose our better-half on the basis of money or love. At one side, marry for money could give you comfortable living and sense of security. However, as per my opinion, marry for love is more wiser as it could give you satisfaction and happiness for life that money could never give.
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also, but, however, if, may, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in short, you know, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81019830028 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51484689294 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560906515581 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.167787726 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411820690218 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136884353979 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110721274712 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227110127583 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05234424547 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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