You are working in an international company. You need to take some time off work
Write a letter to your employer. In your letter:
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the when you want the time off
say who can do your work when you are away
Dear sir/madam,
I am Harry Martin, senior project manager in your prestigious organisation. With due respect, I am writing this letter to request you for eleven days leave from work to attend family function.
This morning, I received letter from my parents, that mention that they have arranged wedding of my younger brother next month. My presence in this occasion is extremely significant. Being an elder son of the family, I have to perform some responsibilities that no one else could do. The wedding date is 15th of June. However, there would be some pre-wedding customs and post wedding events. So, I request you to grant me leaves from 10th June to 20th June. I will be really grateful to you.
I work in collaboration with my on-site colleague Mr. Jack. In the mean time, I will explain him my team-structure and work allocated to my sub-ordinates so that he could manage my team appropriately in my absence. I am sure that he will handle my responsibilities very nicely and would not make my absence realized. His email id is jack145@abc.com and his contact number is 401-4015-401.
Considering my perseverance and past successful project deliveries, I hope you will accept my request and grant me eleven days off from work.
Thanking you,
Your Sincerely
Harry Martin
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01851851852 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06696802509 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62037037037 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0438778868 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2666666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53333333333 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179130423368 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638339543155 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645247713896 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10433570564 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385447596089 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.