Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Marriage is certainly an important and life-changing phase in a human’s life. Some people opine that one should marry the love of his life, whereas others hold the notion that one should marry a rich person for the sake of certainty in life. I am a strong advocate of the viewpoint that love is the foundation of any marriage. In this essay, I will discuss both points of views.
There are several pros of a love marriage. First and foremost, a strong bonding and affection between two different persons are the two most important pillars of a strong relationship, which is very much prominent within an adorable couple. A human come across many ups and downs throughout his life. During tough situations, a loving couple supports each other mentally always and emotionally that reduces the stress level and make them stronger psychologically. Statistics have shown that the loneliness and unsuccessful relationships are among the major reasons for depression. Subsequently, people in love marriage complement by uplifting and motivating each other.
On the contrary, a marriage relying only on love may sometimes vanish when a couple couldn’t earn enough money to manage their family needs such as paying bills or buying food. In such scenarios, “marry for money” context seems to be a better choice. Financial stability helps the couple withstand life’s challenges although it may not bring them closer to each other.
To recapitulate, love is a strong and irreplaceable component of a healthy married life; however, money is also a considerable factor for sustaining the married life. In my opinion, each person should make their independent vital contribution to financial expenses for the creation of a happy family.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es for the creation of a happy family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, whereas, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30107526882 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02228122201 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2569050902 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205976662063 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669768742934 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525630815373 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13299052641 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480858625477 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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