Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.
Nowadays, people are migrating from villages and small regions to metro cities. The quality of life in these highly dense cities is rapidly deteriorating. There are many reasons which have led to such a poor standard of life. In this essay, I will discuss the causes for bad condition of life and appropriate measures which can be taken in this regard.
There are many causes for a substandard sustenance. First and foremost, the reason is over-population. For instance, a large number of youngsters are shifting from rural areas to urban sectors to acquire a good education and a job with a handsome salary. Subsequently, such a logistic growth of citizens within a congested zone has created an imbalance between supply and demand of various resources; which has led to increase in prices of daily need products, ultimately caused a poor livelihood. Furthermore, lack of attention by the government on civic problems has also contributed to a bad living.
Considering the solutions, the mode of life in towns can be improved if people stop moving from their hometowns to cities. This can be achieved by providing facilities which are easily accessible to a person in a developed part of the country. For example, by the construction of good schools, colleges and hospitals in all regions, individuals will avoid coming to big cities; and thus, making metropolises less crowded and less polluted. Moreover, the government should give proper attention to public properties like the drainage system should be improved to avoid waterlogging and a better transport system.
To recapitulate, it's undebatable to mention that quality of life in established areas is decreasing. The government should take prompt actions to improve the lifestyle through proper management and maintenance. A country will grow only if it’s all citizens are sustaining a healthy life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...eason is over-population. For instance, a large number of youngsters are shifting from rural area...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27090301003 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03490652227 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595317725753 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2441688756 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197125994486 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574743756218 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697788424713 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111030106675 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642822152056 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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