Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, every individual is working very hard for his sustenance in an expensive economy, where the basic need of a citizen is not limited to just food and shelter. In continuation to this notion, there are many people who give priority to the price of the products and services, namely, mobile phones and medical treatments. I agree with this belief that a large section of the population gives relevance to money while sorting for products. However, people prefer to give value to the quality of services rather than price when the health issues are concerned.
Adults are working day and night these days and they require various technical things that can automate their daily tasks and these types of equipment have become a necessity for a working professional. Because of an increase in daily needs items and limited earning, people automatically tend to grant significance to the money at the time of purchase. Furthermore, in modern society people likes to show themselves superior to others and this rivalry feeling forces an individual to buy various things which do not fit in one's budget. Thus, a person automatically gives importance to money while purchasing a luxurious product.
On the contrary, a large section of citizens gives importance to the quality instead of a cost in the matter of health. For instance, studies have shown that 80% of patients prefer to take the medicine from a trusted pharmacy than buying for a local brand, despite less price and same composition of medicine.
To conclude, there are enormous scenarios where a person gives importance to the money and their number incontrovertibly outnumbered the situations where people give importance to the other parameters of service.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 525, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... buy various things which do not fit in ones budget. Thus, a person automatically gi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, thus, while, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16370106762 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80337612417 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576512455516 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.6534875406 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.909090909 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163762371737 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619036841122 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467260877322 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091058139425 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328221312462 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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