On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:
describe the item you lost
explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you want them to do
Dear Mr Steves,
I am writing this letter in regards to the travel insurance policy, I bought from your company a few months ago. I would like to make a claim under that policy. Last week, I went for a family holiday in Turkey and I lost my handbag and a camera during this trip.
Let me explain the situation in more detail. We went for a dinner in a restaurant named “Indian Spices” on 22nd May, and I forgot my maroon colour Lavie purse, the modal number of which is L302M and a Nikon camera, modal number of which was NH320P, inside the dining hall of that place. When we came back to our room, I realized that I forgot my valuables and we immediately rushed back to that place, but I couldn’t find my belongings there. The manager over that place mentioned that some other customer must have taken the items and, even they hadn’t installed any cameras within the restaurant which could have helped in the tracking of the thief.
The things I lost cost around 500 dollars in total. As per terms in the policy, you can either refund the amount or can give a new handbag or a camera as a replacement for lost things. Please let me about the further formalities.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Harman Kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... Mr Steves, I am writing this letter in regards to the travel insurance policy, I bought f...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: HAVE_A_BREAKFAST[3]
Message: When we speak of types of meals, the article is not required: 'for dinner'.
Suggestion: for dinner
...n the situation in more detail. We went for a dinner in a restaurant named 'Indian Spic...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urse, the modal number of which is L302M and a Nikon camera, modal number of whic...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58771929825 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4697461499 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644736842105 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.9260326076 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1666666667 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183935115568 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603421372955 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528998908972 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113730704633 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454485706537 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.